Need Harsh Critics. UC Essay. Will return favor

College Essays
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<p>Anyone who could read my UC essays right now? Harsh critics wanted, I need criticism haha.</p>

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<p>Send it over and I’ll send you mine.</p>

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<p>P-to-the-M me.</p>

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<p>Ill swap ya.</p>

<p>email is easier in my opinion. send me an email and Ill send you mine back: connor.shinn(-at)comcast(dot)net</p>