<p>I’ve just written the common app essay, but I think my essay’s “message” (or main point) is cliche. I haven’t read any other essays with the same main point, but I’m very worried and would like someone to look over my draft. Also, my essay is over 700 words right now so I need some help cutting it down. </p>
<p>If you want me to read one of your essays in exchange, I’ll gladly do so.</p>