Need help editing UC Prompt #2!

College Essays
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<p>anybody still up this late? I really need someone to help me edit my essay, I just finished writing it. Thank you very MUCH!!!</p>

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<p>im good blue</p>

<p>send me, i dont know what you mean by edit as in fixing or giving opinion</p>

<p>but ill do me best</p>

3

<p>I just send it to you, I need help with grammar and stuffs… haha. i just write it in like 2 minutes…</p>

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<p>ug, i dont feel up to this. Your grammer really needs some conjunction and some compound sentences. I get the point you’re trying to make a connection through a father son relationship about your world but needs some more refining. </p>

<p>I cant help as much if there is a lack in brainstorming.</p>

5

<p>thx for reviewing it.im just wondering what part you dont feel up to?.</p>

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<p>Hey i need more readers plz.</p>