Need help modifying my essay

College Essays
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<p>Modifying as in:
1.) Shortening it by about 50 words
2.) Because my stupid self posted it on the forums without thinking.</p>

<p>Anyone up to it? =D</p>

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<p>I’ll help ya ;)</p>

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<p>anymore takers? Please, I’m really unsure about this prompt</p>

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<p>anyone still there?</p>