Need help,submitting the commonapp within a couple of hours!

Applying to College College Essays
#1

<p>Would anyone like to read and critique my short answer question? I plan to submit it today, and I'd like to make any improvements before it's too late! Thanks in advance!</p>

#2

<p>i'll read and critique it</p>

#3

<p>send it over ill chek</p>

#4

<p>i'll try...</p>

#5

<p>I'll try as well.</p>

#6

<p>i'd be happy to :]</p>

#7

<p>ill read ...............</p>

#8

<p>sure thing</p>

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#9