Need help,submitting the commonapp within a couple of hours!

<p>Would anyone like to read and critique my short answer question? I plan to submit it today, and I'd like to make any improvements before it's too late! Thanks in advance!</p>

<p>i'll read and critique it</p>

<p>send it over ill chek</p>

<p>i'll try...</p>

<p>I'll try as well.</p>

<p>i'd be happy to :]</p>

<p>ill read ...............</p>

<p>sure thing</p>