<p>Can anyone read my creation essay? I’m having troubles becuase it sounds more like a description than an essay. I also need help on my topic sentence and and ending.</p>
<p>I wanna read! But If I were you, I wouldn’t share essays to random people . . .</p>
<p>Share your essay with one or two of your teachers, explaining that you would love their feedback, if they have time to read it. You can also share your essay with other adults you know. You have good resources available to you, should you decide to use them.</p>