Need help with my common app essay

<p>I'm applying to the vast majority of my colleges via the common application. However, I have already applied to one that doesn't use common app, and because of this, the essay I sent into that school wasn't replying to one of the common application prompts. That said, I personally believe it's a good essay, and none of the common app questions really do anything for me. I tried responding to them, I came up with bland rough drafts with nothing special to them. For this reason I'm thinking about using the essay I've already written to respond to question #1 on the common application (Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story). What I'm asking is that someone or multiple people look at my essay and deem whether or not it is an appropriate response to the prompt. You can also feel free to give me general feedback on it. It's about 600 or words.</p>

<p>if you're at all interested please PM me and I'll send it to you!</p>

<p>You can PM me</p>

<p>Hey PM me, I can read it if you want!</p>