Need help with Writing problem!

<p>These novels move WILLING readers away from THEIR LIVES and INTO A WORLD that is AT ONCE fantastic and mysterious. NO ERROR</p>

<p>what is the error?</p>

<p>No error? o-o</p>

<p>I don't think there is one. I'm just unclear on what "willing readers" are ...</p>

<p>^I think "willing" is describing readers who are malleable or flexible.</p>

<p>ok, mystery solved. It is no error. That's what I thought but my answer sheet had a typo! Thanks!</p>

<p>Wouldn't 'at once' be 'at once both'? The original sounds unidiomatic.</p>

<p>No, actually you need to know that word pair because they have been teating it lately. it is " at once.....and" . If you see that construction "at once" must be paired with "and" and what comes after each part must be parallel in construction. It is in the Blue Book ( cant remember which test) and has appeared on at least 4 other recent tests.......</p>

<p>^Yeah, the word pair is "at once.. and"</p>