<p>Hi everyone. I am not completely satisfied with my two essays that I have written for a scholarship. I mean, everything I wrote was honest but I don’t think they are unique, and my act/sat score was not great so I need pretty decent essays. I keep on trying to tweak them but I have just read them over and over way too much and I think I am just making them worse. The deadline is in two days so that is why I keep messing with them, because I go to submit them and then I just feel like I need to go back and fix things. What I really need at this point is a second opinion. Will someone please read them and give me honest criticism. I don’t care how harsh it is. I want to know the truth about what to fix. Also, please don’t forget to keep in mind that the deadline is in two days. Thanks a bunch!</p>