<p>I’m in a bit of a rush as I just started my essays, but I have my reasons. I would like anyone on this thread here to critique my essay. You can tell me cut out parts, use better vocabulary where needed, make sections clearer, etc. I am welcoming any type of critique and I know this essay is a bit long I will probably be shortening it. THANK YOU GUYS in advance!! you’re lifesavers.</p>
<p>ill read it and critique for you. PM it over.</p>
<p>I’m willing to read and critique it.</p>
<p>if you’d like any more opinions I’d be happy to read it :)</p>
<p>Uh sure PM me then.</p>
<p>Send it to me. I will have feedback</p>