Need some experienced people to help me read my UC Prompt 1

<p>does anyone with experience want to help me revise my uc personal statement (Prompt1)?
thank you guys</p>

<p>I’ll give it a shot. Send me a PM.
And as a note, in case you were wondering my credentials (or lack thereof), I’m currently a freshman at Johns Hopkins University. Other schools I was accepted to were University of Chicago and Cornell. In other words, I’m far from the best reader, but I’ll do my best.</p>