Need someone to read one paragraph from my Penn Essay

<p>My Penn essay is strong overall but one paragraph is weak. Can someone please help? I will PM my paragraph.</p>

<p>I'll take a look if you want.</p>

<p>^Thanks Pm'd you</p>

<p>I'll look at it for you</p>

<p>i will read yours if you read mine :D</p>

<p>^mom209 pm'd you and wilddreams pm'd you also and i will read yours</p>

<p>bump i need a couple more opinions thanks</p>

<p>i can read it if you want, i sent mine three days ago.</p>

<p>If you PM it to me before 12 AM EST, I def. can read it! Since the ED deadline is 11:59 PM EST today, I think that'd be fair?</p>

<p>pm'd both of you. anyone else want to give some last minute opinions?</p>

<p>i can take a look :)</p>

<p>ok ill pm you</p>

<p>I could take a look at it. PM me</p>

<p>ok pm'd you as well</p>

<p>i'd take a look.. pm me</p>