<p>Hey everyone, im new to the whole essay writing for college and have started to write at least the majority of them before summer is up. This is the essay for the UMBC Honors app and was wondering if anyone would critique it. I know its not very good and it is my first shot at it so hopefully with everyones help it becomes something nice :D. Im not sure how to do this but do you all just post and i pm it over?</p>
<p>yep. That’s how you do it. I’ll read it if you want.</p>
<p>oh thanks!</p>
<p>Sure mate. Send it over.</p>