No 2010ers please; preferably parents.

<p>I only want serious people who are willing to give honest feedback.</p>

<p>I just finished my personal statement but I don’t think I answered the prompt well. Actually, I don’t even think I answered the prompt… I feel like I gave more detail for the unimportant things and just quickly ran through the important things that should highlight me. Any suggestions on how I could make my essay better? Uhg, I feel like this essay is a disaster… But, rather than coming up with a whole new essay, I want to refine this one. So, anyone interested in helping me either PM me or leave a post. Thank you.</p>