<p>hey everyone, this is my first post (although i’ve always been cruisin the forums)</p>
<p>anyways, I started this essay (its from the common app) but I have no idea where to go from where I am. I have some ideas but I don’t know how to incorporate them.</p>
<p>It also probably has a lot of errors and I also don’t think the opening is catching enough</p>
<p>so if someone could please read it and give me their feedback, i’d appreciate it. :]</p>