"No sooner than" question. Details inside. Thanks

<p>This is the question. How do I correct it.</p>

<p>No sooner did Raheem comment on the lovely weather when raindrops began to fall from the sky.</p>

<p>Should it be</p>

<p>No sooner did Raheem comment on the lovely weather than when raindrops began to fall from the sky.</p>

<p>How would you correct it?</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

<p>i think it would be the second one because i think it goes like this:</p>

<p>No sooner did [gerund phrase] than [that].</p>

<p>the gerund phrase in this case is “raheem comment on the lovely weather”.</p>