Northstarmom please help

<p>I know you give great feedbacks on essays but I don't feel comfortable posting my essay on the board. Will you email me at .... edit: let's keep the discussion here on the board.</p>

<p>Sorry, I don't give feedback through e-mail. If you wish that kind of personal attention, my advice is to talk to an informed adult in real life.</p>

<p>leely888,</p>

<p>lol, if you felt that you wrote your essay in an honest tone.. and you showed rather than told.... just get any english teacher to read and check for grammar and tone and such... it's not that big of a deal.</p>