Not applying to hyps

<p>Actually, I am. Now that you got past my title, care to critique my essay?</p>

<p>Sure! I think you were emailing my sister about me possibly helping you with your essays? (She uses my old account, so I was really confused at first when I read the email notification, lol.) Heads up, though; because the essay ended up sort of personal, I’d rather not share mine, if you don’t mind. But I’ll help you revise yours if you like. Good luck with Cornell! :)</p>

<p>Need more, must bump</p>

<p>Might as well, since I’m here. Curse your sneaky tactics.</p>

<p>I’d be happy to have a look for you! Fell free to send it on if you like…</p>

<p>ill read it over for ya!</p>