<p>I significantly improved from my previous essay but it is still a little lengthy and certain parts I question</p>
<p>please give me some feedback - time is running out and I need to do at least one other edit (not including grammar/diction)</p>
<p>sure i can help. PM it over</p>
<p>I will be glad to help
PM it</p>
<p>no one has gotten back to me can someone please give me some feedback</p>
<p>Oh I’m applying as well. I’m applying RPI and it asks me why I am interested. How do I write?</p>
<p>i am glad to read</p>
<p>I have already submitted it</p>