NROTC Scholarship Essay, please read for me?

College Essays
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<p>If anyone would please critique/edit an essay for my NROTC scholarship application it would be very, very much appreciated. All feedback on it is welcome. PM me if your interested, thanks in advance!</p>

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<p>Please post here if your willing to read and I’ll PM it to you.</p>

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<p>Sure, PM me with prompt.</p>

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<p>Sure PM and I’ll give feedback</p>