<p>celebration was the only one that made it seem good</p>
<p>What’s the celebration question?</p>
<p>oh for why the thing about changing the rules and adding places mentioned</p>
<p>I couldn’t remember the exactly answer i put</p>
<p>Was the word that wouldn’t fit for “glittered” shone or glared? i put glared…</p>
<p>i picked glared</p>
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<p>Thus,</p>
<p>someone else’s </p>
<p>its (no change)</p>
<p>did you guys add the part about the award the architect received from reagan? i think i did…but i cant remember</p>
<p>I said after the last sentence in paragraph 5…</p>
<p>I don’t know what question you are talking about with choice D and erasing and putting a comma…</p>
<p>Yeah, I only vaguely remember the changing rules and adding places question… can anyone remember anything more about that question?</p>
<p>it wasn’t relevant because the audience wasn’t expecting that</p>
<p>it had to be an award concerning architecture and what it mentioned really wasn’t</p>
<p>yup, glared. and the award from reagan sentence should not be added because it did not live up to the expectations of the previous sentence or something?</p>
<p>no, the phrase about medal or honor from reagan didn’t it didn’t meet the expectations established by the previous sentence (the previous sentence mentioned his contribution, and that’s something he received)</p>
<p>I added it. I said it clarified commended or something.</p>
<p>it could have been glared. to glare means to shine with a harsh uncomfortably brilliant light… but im not sure.</p>
<p>Yeah they mentioned the award because it was an example of how his legacy reached further than his work or something</p>
<p>Hmm… maybe I was wrong. I added it because they said he should be commended and remembered for more than just architecture. So I though that award was an example of him being commended for something different. </p>
<p>I must have read something incorrectly.</p>
<p>you dont mention the award because the previous sentence didnt adequately prepare the audience for it.</p>
<p>Nhk51192- are you saying you put the same thing that I did?</p>
<p>charlieharper- what do you mean? why did the sentence not prepare readers?</p>
<p>they said what they mentioned wasn’t the most important thing he did concerning architecture</p>
<p>the amount of time the legacy lasted was represented by “immaterial” wasn’t it? enduring has a negative connotation.</p>
<p>The previous sentence was talking about how he contributed as an architect. The Medal of Honor is something to do with war I presume? So I decided not to add it.</p>
<p>was harlaam a place that he would only leave temporarily</p>