*** OFFICIAL JUNE 2014 SAT INTERNATIONAL ***

<p>Assignment:
PLEASE GRADE MY ESSAY
Do people accomplish more when they are allowed to do things in their own way? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.
Yes people do accomplish more if they are allowed to do things in their own ways as it can help them to create their own style and comfort zone. For example worlds best search engine suceeded only when they had created their own way of making a relaible source and the great painter MF hussain who could not become sucessful until he started painting in his own style and mahatma Gandhi the man who helped india to attain freedom from the britishers</p>

<p>Google the worlds best search engine was just an odinary search engine until 1990’s but it became sucessful when the CEO of the company adapted a new idea , the company designed a system by which the number of links pertaining to certain website determined its usefulness. Because of this feature it bolstered their existing program and google became the most succesful company if google had used the same hackyneyed way of determing a websites usefulness then it wouldn’t have suceeded. This idea helped google to improve and ape the search engines.</p>

<p>MF hussain one of the worlds most renowned painter of the 20th century used to sell his paintings on the streets of mumbai in india, he used to paint what others told him to paint and due to this his techniques and style was considered prosaic but when he started painting his imagination on the sheets he became the most succesful painter of his time he did not paint other peoples imagination but started painting his own ideas what made him sucessful he created his own style. </p>

<p>MK Gandhi also known as the leader of the freedom fighter who had a major role to free india from britishers. He did not believe in violence and belligerence but he believed in “satyagraha” i.e non violence he did not adopt oppressive policies against the britishes but he freed india with the means of non cooperation which made the people of india more independent and decreased the power of the britishers. He did not adopt the same aggressive policies against the britishers but satyagraha which helped india to attain freedom against the britishers</p>

<p>if people are allowed to do any work or task in their own way then they do become more sucessful. it can bolster the persons self confidence which is the main determinant for a person to be sucessful. As it is said by Einstien “People become sucessful only if they open the doors of their imaginantion”.</p>

<p>@yashjain97‌</p>

<p>At first, I am apologizing for my grammar and perhaps not proper use of some phrases, but by the way I got 9 in May so I consider myself a person who can give you a good advice.
In my opinion, you should work on your coherence. Your sentences have so much words and there are a lot of repetitions such as “but”. You should use more various linking words (due to, because of, however, furthermore, unfortunately) instead of “but”. This essay has 415 words and due to this I am almost certaint that you didn’t write in 25 minutes so you should train yourself by using your own knowledge and experience but not by searching internet and dictionaries.<br>
My grade for this essay is 6 or 7, you should definitely reduce number of words and lenght of your sentences </p>

<p>I’m taking it tomorrow! I’m so nervous! Got a terrible score in Barron’s… This is kinda demoralizing me. :(</p>

<p>From the Philippines.</p>

<p>Ill be definately contributing to the doc.</p>

<p>Since i will be one of the first to take the test ( germany)</p>

<p>I think the East Asians will take the tests before anyone else. </p>

<p>Any last tips for the test before I go to bed? :(( Help me please.</p>

<p>hiii guys i just want to ask about the document how could i use it ?
am new here and tomorrow is my first sat trial am a sophomore soo good luck to all ufff u :slight_smile: </p>

<p>I am freaked out as well.
I love these forums, they make me feel that I’m know alone in this.</p>

<p>Good luck to everyone!</p>

<p>WILL POST on the doc. Good luck to all!</p>

<p>Alright anybody who’s too lazy to post on the google doc can discuss their answers with others in this chat:

I will be on both the chat and the doc. See you there!</p>

<p>anyone finished to discuss !! </p>

<p>Anyone??</p>

<p>Did anyone identify the year/month of this sat, if repeated? </p>

<p>Essay topic: Will one feel much happier living in one community than moving around constantly?</p>

<p>Or something like that.</p>

<p>Yeah had that essay topic too!! </p>

<p>I didn’t get to finish it tho. :(</p>

<p>how many no errors in the structure??</p>

<p>THE MATH WAS A NIGHTMERE</p>

<p>anyone know the last 2 questions in section 8???</p>

<p>The one that says (a+b)/2 = radical (ab)</p>

<p>And the last triangle one. :O</p>

<p>Youngbin1130, me too:(</p>

<p>June 2013 CR/Maths repeated. A few writing questions too</p>