<p>Decision: Deferred</p>
<p>Objective:[ul]
[<em>] SAT I (breakdown): 2260 (740 Math, 740 Reading, 780 Writing)
[</em>] SAT I superscore (breakdown): Only sent 1 test date.
[<em>] ACT (breakdown):
[</em>] ACT superscore (breakdown):
[<em>] SAT II: 800 Chem, 760 Math II
[</em>] Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.72
[<em>] Weighted GPA: 4.64 (highest in school is 4.9. Massive grade trend, every year I got a lot better, freshman year I had a 4.2)
[</em>] Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): Top 10%
[<em>] AP (place score in parentheses): MEH (5), Chem (5), Calc A/B (5), Human Geo (5), Lang&Comp (5)
[</em>] IB (place score in parentheses):
[<em>] Senior Year Course Load: AP Physics C, AP Bio, AP Calc B/C, AP US History, AP Lit, AP Psych, Economics (no AP level offered), Gym
[</em>] Number of other EA applicants in your school: 3
[li] Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.):[/ul] Nothing major. National Merit Scholarship Semifinalist, then placing in Top 10 in New Jersey’s Chem I Science League, Chem II Science League, and Merck State Science Day for Chemistry</p>[/li]
<p>Subjective:[ul]
[<em>] Extracurriculars (place leadership in parentheses):
High school lit magazine (Editor)
Science league, trumpet
Tennis (JV co-captain)
National Honor Society
English Honor Society
Chinese Honor Society- these last 3 are admittedly meaningless.
(Most of my time is spent teaching other kids in my grade so they don’t fail their classes, but I didn’t really know how to put this on my app. I know I should’ve, but I just left it out because it’s not quite tutoring. It’s just something there.)
[</em>] Job/Work Experience:
Chinese to English translations for an actual screenplay
Internship for market research for 2 weeks
[li] Volunteer/Community service:[/ul][/li]Pennies for Peace
Volunteering at a hospital
Family and I responsible for the development of a school in rural China</p>
<p>Writing (Write a brief description and Rate Quality on 1-10 Scale; 10 as Best):[ul]
[<em>] Essays (Include Subjects):[list]
[li] Common App Main: My Chinese sucked until I realized it was a huge mistake to not learn it properly. Took Chinese in high school, did extra work outside of school to improve my Chinese to the point of being able to give a half-decent speech. English teacher said he had nothing to criticize. 10/10[/li][</em>] EC Short Answer: Expanded more about the community service I did in China. 7/10
[<em>] Extended essay(which topic): Find X. Personified X as someone running away from the alphabet, found it and learned it was having an identity crisis on account of all the things it is (list of references I sneaked in include Malcolm X, generation x, pirates, X-Men, calculus, XOXO, etc.). Then turned it into a discussion of identity, asking what are we, if through life everyone else forces their own perceptions of us onto our identities. 9/10
[</em>] Optional Essay: Just a love fest for my favorite author and band. 8/10
[<em>] Why Chicago: Talked about attending the Summer Session there and how much I loved it, from the weather to the bookstores to the people. Discussed the Core and how I thought it was a wonderful fit. 10/10
[</em>] Other:[/ul]
[<em>] Teacher Recommendation #1: Probably decent. Didn’t read. 8/10
[</em>] Teacher Recommendation #2: Probably decent. Didn’t read. 8/10
[<em>] Counselor Rec: Our guidance counselor does nothing for us. I’ve never been given any college advice from him, and everyone who’s tried to just gets a “Look it up yourself.” No clue/10.
[</em>] Additional Rec:
[<em>] Interview: Went extremely well. Talked for 15 minutes about bookstores, then talked about perception and cognitive science. At the end she said she felt I’d be a great fit at UChicago. 10/10
[</em>] Art Supplement:[/list]</p>
<p>Other[ul]
[<em>] Date Submitted App: October 8th.
[</em>] State (if domestic applicant): NJ
[<em>] Country (if international applicant):
[</em>] School Type: Public
[<em>] Ethnicity: Asian
[</em>] Gender: Male
[<em>] Income Bracket: No FA.
[</em>] Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.):[/ul]</p>
<p>Reflection[ul]
[<em>] Strengths: Essays, interview, my chemistry stuff?
[</em>] Weaknesses: I have an ugly transcript freshman and sophomore year, probably didn’t do enough extra curriculars.
[<em>] Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: Isn’t this a little redundant? It can be shown in the strengths and weaknesses…
[</em>] What would you have done differently?:[/ul] Find a way to put my teaching in there, because I’ve been up 3 AM working with 5 different people so they don’t fail their chemistry test the next morning. Spend more time revising my essays. Have a much, much better freshman and sophomore year, and stop getting 0s on math homework checks. Maybe I came across as too much of a science man, when I honestly love Humanities just as much. But I don’t know, even my interviewer said I’d be a great fit.</p>
<p>Or were my essays just not as good as I was led to believe? If so, that stings, since writing is one of my passions…</p>
<p>[/list]Other Factors:
General Comments/Congratulations/Venting/Commiserations, etc: It’s disappointing, but I have to move on. My English teacher never felt my essays had any problems with them, and I felt the Find X had enough depth of thought, and the Why UChicago had enough heartfelt passion, but I guess it didn’t cover the rest of my app. Well, it’s still my first choice, and I still have a shot. Congratulations to everyone who got in, good luck to everyone deferred, and to those who are rejected: What UChicago looks for is different than what other colleges look for. You’ll find where you belong.</p>