<p>I would definitly appeal if I were you. Your scores and grades are very good, and you were a four year athlete. It doesn’t make any sense to me.</p>
<p>you should appeal…yours makes no sense</p>
<p>“founder of aids relief in africa” by UCplaya05</p>
<p>Wow thats a hook.</p>
<p>haha yeah i think i will but im planning on going to UT right now, and if they overturn my decision maybe ill do SC but def am not getting my hopes up or anything</p>
<p>yall help me write an appeal letter i dunno what to say, “*** why didnt u let me me in *****es?” HAHA jk but really what do i say</p>
<p>W<em>T</em>F and b<em>i</em>t<em>c</em>h_eS were those words right there lmao</p>
<p>its a club i founded at my school, fire</p>
<p>still the proud president, we raised more than 2000 dollars for aids relief</p>
<p>haha ucplaya. You shouldve written about it in the application. sounds impressive. I just like how it sounds like you started the whole aids relief IN africa.</p>
<p>well basically i started a club to help raise money for relief from students and companies in my community. I didnt only wanna send money to 1 country in africa so i distributed the money to organizations like the red cross in countries all over africa but those who were more in dire need got more of our raisings. i helped pull in 2000 dollars from individuals and companies donated a lot more. </p>
<p>i dont wanna ever stop…EVEN AT PEPPERDINE!!</p>
<p>Melmel. Write a letter now, and then look at it in like 3 days.</p>
<p>i’m a realllly levelheaded person so im not like hysterical or even cried at all, heres a draft i have no idea what to say:</p>
<p>Dear USC Admissions Board,</p>
<pre><code>I was very disappointed at being rejected from the USC class of 2011. USC was and is my dream school, and a seemingly perfect match for my credentials. Since submitting my application in mid-November, I learned of my status as a National Merit Finalist, an honor normally rewarded with a half tuition scholarship. I was also in the process of being considered for a North Texas Alumni Club scholarship upon learning of my deferral. My senior mid-year grades were high, even taking three AP classes. The fact that I am qualified for two USC merit scholarships explains why I am so surprised at your decision, and it is for these reasons that I ask you to reconsider my application.
Fight on always,
Melanie K****
</code></pre>
<p>input welcome, more than welcome, WANTED</p>
<p>Rejected.
i’m not posting my stats, i’m too lazy.
i haven’t heard from nyu yet… but i probably will just end up going to chapman, maybe i can transfer i dunno… i hate chapman</p>
<p>yea its sound good mel. at the end, u seem really ****ed but that might be what is needed for u to stand out. sounds good. good luck melbaby</p>
<p>You need more stuff in there. Specific things please. You may choose to not show it here though where everyone can see. A few awkward phrases/comma mistakes too.</p>
<p>^yea^. make it a lil longer</p>
<p>okay examples should i reiterate stuff from before, like softball etc</p>
<p>i dont wanna seem ****ed but ur right, a kissass letter will prob be thrown in the heap with the other 520 that dont get ovrturned</p>
<p>ucplaya have u visited pepperdine? i did and its weakk</p>
<p>^ r u serious^ everyone loves it there. im goin on wed. but thanks for runing my day. :-(</p>
<p>y was it weak?</p>
<p>awww no its beautiful…its just like a bubble and very goody good no party…i have 2 friends that love it there its just not for anyone who likes to party and i took you as a partier lol</p>
<p>and boston u is badass i almost applied there but didnt for some dumbbb reason</p>
<p>Examples:
Specific PSAT score
Reason why you were chosen beyond JUST National merit semi-finalist
4 years of softball–a big commitment and why it makes you a different candidate from what they first saw you as</p>
<p>This is all I know about you. Perhaps you should look over the application you completed in December and find your faults or areas that you didnt fully develop.</p>