<p>Hi! I’ve edited this piece like 40 gazillion times and it’s in serious need of an extra pair of eyes. Can someone please help edit/proofread it? It’s my commonapp essay. 
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<p>I’ll help!</p>
<p>bump! anyone else?</p>
<p>bump</p>
<p>final bump!</p>
<p>< professional proofreader.</p>
<p>yay!</p>