<p>about the SAT essay. would it be better to use one big example throughout the whole essay or to use three or more short ones?
The problem is that when I use a big example it’s either off topic and/or immature.
Like last time, I wrote about how food at McDonalds gave me Hepatitis (A) to prove my point that you shouldn’t listen to what people say (In that case, it was “McDonald’s food is really healthy”.)</p>
<p>What did you score on that essay?
I would use 3 short examples in order to fill up the whole space.</p>
<p>i think its better to use two well-developed examples.</p>
<p>Yep! I agree with “dumbstruck 1089”.</p>
<p>i plan on writing a 4 paragraph essay with 2 main body paragraphs on 2 main ideas.</p>
<p>i got a 12 last time, hopefully i can repeat it.</p>