Opinions anyone....

Parent Cafe
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<p>To any resident posters out there… here is something I have written, I would like your honest assessment before I turn it in</p>

<p>Tramalfadorians shriek shriek shriek
for it is you who have to seek
the color of a brother
what is wrong
are you blind
to see the truth
that we are invisible until you seek the sooth
darkness is galore
when you see the gore
however, it is quite trite
to say that we are optic white
(c)</p>

<p>a little poetic reflection on college admissions… ha ha ha</p>

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<p>bump bump bump</p>

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<p>Is it a rap song?</p>

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<p>ha ha… no, its a spontaneous creation by me :)</p>

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<p>Sempitern: I’ve enjoyed your thoughtful posts this year. Don’t quit your day job.</p>

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<p>Sempitern, I would worry about being overrun by Gallifreian cavalry if I were you.</p>

<p>What Idler said.</p>

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<p>rhyming does not make a poet.
hope you know it.</p>

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<p>Who have to seek? Theres a grammatical error in there somewhere…</p>

<p>:)</p>

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<p>Either there’s a generation gap, or that’s way over my head.</p>

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<p>“Don’t quit your day job.”</p>

<p>don’t worry I wont… I wont become one of those performers whose gigs include the holiday inn… lol, thanks for the comments</p>