<p>asdf</p>
<p>“asdf” is a really good essay but I think you should brush up on your grammar and punctuation a little. Otherwise, you’re all set. </p>
<p>Not a bad essay, but appears to approach the issue from a leftist perspective. For the more conservative Ivies, try coming at the subject more from the right… maybe something like lkjh.</p>
<p>That’s a good start. I would write “ghjkl” in order to complete the thought and to provide a unique insight into your life. Your essay will likely be fine if you submitted it as is, but I believe my suggestions make it about 10x better.</p>