opinions on my BS/MD essay

<p>Hey CC'ers! I'm going to be a senior and was going to apply to BS/MD programs this year (brown plme, umkc's 6 year, slu's med scholars). I have written my "Why I want to pursue medicine" essay and wanted some opinions on it. I wanted to know if my passion and experiences really showed why I wanted to pursue medicine and what interests me. I would love if people who currently are or already have passed through the BS/MD program applications (rejected or accepted, doesn't matter) could read my essay and tell me what I needed to improve and give me their opinion on the points I wrote above. I would really appreciate the input, and message me with your email and I'll send my essay to you guys. Thanks!</p>

<p>I'd love to give u some feedback.</p>