<p>Hey guys. I finished my personal statement a couple of weeks ago and i need some of your opinions on it. It’s on my haitian ethnicity! If anyone could read my essay that would be great!</p>
<p>Thanks guys</p>
<p>p.s i will inbox my essay to you!</p>
<p>I don’t usually respond to these requests because I get too many as a result of the book I wrote, but since I worked in Haiti for 5 years, I’d like to read it. Are you looking for comments, opinion, proofreading, or some in-depth criticism?</p>
<p>hey thanks so much!!
this is actually my first draft and i think it could be soo much better! so in depth criticism, opinions, anything would be great! Thanks!</p>
<p>digmedia is your book a novel? If so, what is it named? I’m a writer as well and would love to take a look.</p>
<p>I can’t use CC to promote the book, but you asked a direct question so I will point you to CC’s book review: [www.collegeconfidential.com/college_books/college-application-essays.htm</a>](<a href=“http://www.collegeconfidential.com/college_books/college-application-essays.htm]www.collegeconfidential.com/college_books/college-application-essays.htm”>http://www.collegeconfidential.com/college_books/college-application-essays.htm) This points to the first edition (out of print) but it’s now available in a second edition.</p>