ORIGINAL essay from a visionary

College Essays
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<p>Well, I need people to read/comment my essay… it is still in a draft stage, but it is a high number draft and very close to what i believe will be the final result unless for some reason i realize/am told it sucks :stuck_out_tongue: </p>

<p>i think it is pretty good, very original and it was the only thing i felt really passionate about under the essay topic :slight_smile: </p>

<p>if you wanna read it, reply and ill PM it :)</p>

<p>people who have already gotten in with good essays and people from top schools are preferred, but i will by no means judge a reader by the school they go to :)</p>

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<p>pm me. thanks.</p>

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<p>pm thanks s</p>

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<p>pm por favor</p>

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<p>thanks a lot guys :slight_smile: really appreciate the feedback :slight_smile:
it was due today so ill hope for the best :D</p>

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<p>**Would have gotten more responses if you said “greatest draft ever written”.</p>

<p>Just my .02**</p>

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<p>**Would have gotten more responses if you said “greatest draft ever written”.</p>

<p>Just my .02**</p>

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<p>sure… …</p>

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<p>Hey PM me too if it isn’t too late.</p>

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<p>yea i probably would, but it probably isnt the best essay ever written :stuck_out_tongue: dont wanna lie</p>

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<p>pm me bro. I am good at grammar- - got -3 on sat writing</p>

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<p>pm me thanks i wil read it</p>

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<p>ok ! im not sending it anymore :stuck_out_tongue: my deadline was like 5 days ago so dont really need people to proofread it anymore :stuck_out_tongue: but thanks to everyone who did!! :)</p>

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<p>RadronOmega, I’ve been trying to get through to you but can’t find your email address anywhere and I can’t send you a private message either. Would you mind reading my common app transfer essay for me? I’d really appreciate the help.</p>