<p>Hello,
I just wanted some people to check over my essay to make sure I didn’t miss anything. The topic is " Why do you want to attend The Ohio State University". Any comments will be appreciated.
Thanks in advance</p>
<p>For many years, I have considered attending The Ohio State Universitys College of Veterinary Medicine for a professional degree, but I recently discovered the advantages of receiving an undergraduate degree from Ohio State when I attended Pre-Vet Day. Even though I will be an out-of-state student, I felt comfortable at The Ohio State University.
Since relatively few universities possess Animal Science major not to mention one as respected as Ohio States, I was initially attracted to the Columbus campus. Unlike a typical Animal Science program, Ohio States major offers specialized interests that will allow me to focus on Pre-Veterinary Medicine. With a background in horseback riding and equine 4-H projects, I will also be able to enhance my knowledge of horses with equine science classes. Likewise, I can continue to develop my foreign language skills with a German minor. Ohio State will be able to prepare me with a solid base in the principles of science while satisfying my interests in animals and the German language.
Despite the renowned academics at The Ohio State University, I was impressed by the level of student involvement and found many activities in which I could participate that pertain to my major such as Pre-Veterinary Club and Shades of Animal Sciences. At Pre-Vet Day, the students participated with enthusiasm in presentations and tours which reaffirmed my aspirations to attend a college with a passionate student body. As I learned about the opportunities that Ohio State offers, the Honors College seemed particularly appealing to me when I considered the benefits of living in the honors dorms and graduating with a completed research project.
While I gained knowledge concerning the College of Food, Agriculture and Environmental Sciences, I also had the pleasure of experiencing the stimulating atmosphere of the Columbus campus.</p>