<p>The first is about the death of my stepfather - I thought it was emotional and fairly well-written but SHORT. Need some help making it more introspective and LONGER :D</p>
<p>More importantly, I need some help with my essay for the second UC prompt. The second is about running and my self-motivation. I really need help polishing this essay - it’s a bit awkward in places, and I need some seasoned readers to help me out. Brain is melting, can’t look at this essay anymore!</p>