<p>I need a brutal critique of my very personal common app essay that I have to submit in 6 days. I need to know if what I wrote is acceptable. Any advice is appreciated. Thanks :)</p>
<p>Bumpp I really need as much help as I can get. Time is of the essense!</p>
<p>Have you thought about posting in under the college essay forum?</p>
<p>I thought about that, but I need an adult’s opinon.</p>