<p>hey i wrote my short response on my activity. can anyone critique it? PM me. any response is appreciated. also can u post here since i would like to bump the thread up for others to see. thnx :)</p>
<p>anyone ? ...</p>
<p>imiracle~</p>
<p>I would be happy to look at it! Feel free to pm it to me. ~berurah</p>