D19 sent off an application to a competitive science program last night. She asked me for some comments on her essays/app gennerally, but I hadnāt had a chance to give comments on all of them, even though Iād scanned most of it and had some other thoughts.
I mention this here not as a complaint, but as context for the question that follows. As I read the app, one thought I had was that it was just telling an OK story about her, but not one that would compel the program to admit her. While she could certainly the program, she has few great science ECs, and so she really needed to emphasize more the things in her background/experience that would make her a more interesting candidate. But she clearly thought she knew what was best in the application.
Iām not invested in the program sheās applying to ā if she were accepted, that would be awesome, but as best I can tell, itās one of those ālottery ticketā-type programs where the percentage of admissions is very low, so my hopes are not up.
But Iām thinking ahead to the college application process, where packaging the āstory,ā emphasizing the good and unique points, is important. Sheās a really good kid, with decent-but-not-great ECs and very good GPA/scores that would make her a reasonable candidate at most everywhere except the tippy-tops.
We donāt have the money to invest $3k in a college advisor that sort of does soup-to-nuts application stuff. Frankly, I feel like at this point between my own research/reading and CC, Iād know as much as quite a few advisors, and thatās a lot of money to pay for a ābad copā for a kid who generally is very self-motivated. But Iām wondering if there are cheap ways to have someone else ā i.e., not the parent, whose advice might be discounted regardless ā review the overall application to say whether or not the application tells a consistent story. Iām not looking for an essay reader as we have app essay guidebooks (though if somebody has good experience with those, Iām interested in hearing those), more just a big picture comment. Has somebody tried giving a package to a friend familiar with the kid as a set of fresh eyes, or is that just too weird?
Iām not totally averse to paying some money, but if we do pay, Iām kind of thinking we wouldnāt want to pay more than⦠$300? [Plucked that number out of the air, so thatās not set in stone, but figured some number would be better than none for the purposes of this conversation.]