**Person who has influenced me**

College Essays
1

<p>Would anyone like to read my essay in response to the generic “talk about someone who has influenced you”??
I could really use loads of constructive criticism!</p>

<p>(keep in mind that I’m applying to HYPS, etc.)</p>

2

<p>sure, pm it</p>

3

<p>Just curious, are you a 2009 applicant? I’m not comfortable with sharing any information with this year’s group :/</p>

4

<p>I’d love to. Send it via E-mail or PM.</p>

5

<p>oh yes, I am a 2009er, sorry I guess…</p>

6

<p>…I am a Junior transfer with absolutely no interest in HYPS; your info is safe with me. haha</p>

7

<p>transferkid, what’s your situation? Are you an 09er?</p>

8

<p>oh nvm 10char haha</p>

9

<p>I will graduate in '10 with a bachelors in philosophy; then its off to Law school, where I hope to attend a T14 program.</p>

10

<p>I sent it to ya, man :)</p>

11

<p>buuuuuuump</p>

12

<p>I wanna read it :]</p>