<p>Hello!</p>
<p>I’m worring a bit over my Personal Essay. I’ve applying from the UK so I’m not entirely sure about the basic format.</p>
<p>The most recent attempt I’ve written is about How the British National Health Service (NHS) discovered and treated my diabetes, and has given me free advice and drugs for years. However I do not support the idea of a free health service, and the essay explains why.</p>
<p>Is this topic too detached from the “Peronsal” side of the essay? Or is the link of the NHS attending to my diabetes enough?</p>
<p>Any advice would be amazing. And while we’re on the topic, what were the topics of your personal essays?</p>
<p>Thank you!</p>