Personal Essay

College Essays
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<p>Hi Everyone</p>

<p>I just finished my personal essay for the following colleges I plan on applying to (Penn State, Wisconsin, Northwestern, Michigan State). The personal essay is a life changing event in my life. I would like it if some people could critique it to make it flow better, help me with my grammar, and overall make the essay perfect. I would really appreciate it. !!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. I’m class of '09, but I’m not applying to those schools. :)</p>

3

<p>PM me if you’re comfortable. I’ll try to help…</p>

4

<p>PM me. not going to those universities anywayz</p>

5

<p>Hey PM me if you wish and i’ll be happy to give you some suggestions.</p>

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<p>hey pm me if you want…i love reading these things</p>

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<p>You got it. PM me. ('08)</p>