Personal Statement Critique

<p>If you could, please edit my personal statement! Feel free to completely tear it apart, but if you do, then PLEASE provide suggestions on how I can improve it, or else it’s not very helpful!
PM me please! thanks :)</p>

<p>Info:
Hoping to transfer from the University of Georgia to Vanderbilt or William & Mary (yikes… stretch schools…)</p>

<p>ok ten char</p>

<p>sorry… what is ten char?</p>

<p>‘10 char’ stands for ten characters, because the website will not allow posts under ten characters I believe. So people just type that when they have really short responses.</p>

<p>This places has enough jargon to start its own language… :slight_smile: I still don’t get half of it!</p>

<p>Right. .</p>

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<p>O sorry. i guess i should have been more er thoughtful</p>