Personal Statement more about activity and less about myself

<p>I’m writing my Common App Essay about how I taught myself HTML code and created a website to save it from going under. It doesn’t really say much about myself other than that I’m techy and that I’m passionate about the newspaper. I’m afraid my essay is too focused on describing why and how I made the website rather than on my feelings and thoughts. What do you guys think, is this ok for an essay if my supplements are more about myself? I have had 3 people read it and 2 (a professional college counselor and my English teacher) have liked it but the other person has not. I’m debating whether or not to choose a new topic…What do you guys think?</p>

<p>Posting because I’m also curious. My essay is more about what happened. I tried adding as much of my feelings and thoughts as I could.</p>