<p>I would love if someone could proofread this. I’m not the best essay writer but I’d like any an d all opinions, especially on whether or not the message is clear.</p>
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<p>Edit: I noticed I made an error later on in the essay where I refer to what leads me on into something else but I don’t directly address it, I’ll fix that.</p>