<p>How can I improve my personal statement? I think its really weak and off topic. Please give me feedback!</p>
<p>Once I step outside my front door, I perceive a different world. I grow up with tradition and heritage in my home, and step out to different paths of freedom. When I step outside of my traditional lifestyle, everything seems so rich in being something so unique. In each path I observe happiness and sympathy as I see every stranger’s face. Seeing the different lives of others greatly impact my perception of them because there are things that we can’t see what actually affects their lives.<br>
Growing up in a hispanic community, I see the health issues that affect my family’s well being due to their diet. Our diet consists of foods that are very high in fat that causes healthcare issues like diabetes or high blood pressure. By seeing my parents and family struggle with these issues, it hurts me because I know they won’t live a normal life while contemplating what foods they should or shouldn’t eat.therefore, I try my best to fufill their needs and answer thier questions reguarding their health. I know they aren’t getting any younger, so the only thing to do is teach and do whatever there is to do to keep them healthy as long as they shall live. On the other hand, when it comes the community, its in an even worse condition. There are people who suffer from great illnesses like cancer or rare diseses that greatly affect their happiness in their lives. I know I can’t help everyone feel better about their health, but what I can do is enforce it more upon my family so they can llive a better life.<br>
I sit there and think. Why does life have these loopholes when it comes to being healthy or happy? Why do these illnesses exist? If they exist why can’t we reverse it and find a cure? I can sit there and think about a these questions in mind and see my family go on with their life with a content or depressed look on their face. Seeing my family in a condition where they have to pretend everything is fine and carry on with their life, affects me because it makes me feel somewhat responsible because I can fee their happiness shorten every day.<br>
Percieving my world’s health growing up always gave me an interest. I love knowing how to make things better and seeing their honest smile when they say “I’m okay”. Family or not, I was never obvlivious about health. Health is inevitable ; therefore I want to help that person make their smile appear. The way I see this certainly shapes my dreams because what better thing to be happy about other than your own well-being? Everything all ties back down to teaching my family to teaching the community what it is to live a healthy life. My only dream is to see my patient walk out that door feeling healthier and happier than they did when they walked in.</p>