<p>Hi. Can you guyz chk if the introduction to my personal statement is good?</p>
<p>My passion in science grew when I started junior high school. I joined a science club in 7th grade, in which I learned about various human body parts and conducted many interesting experiments. From that day forward, I knew that if there was one thing I wanted to do, it was to advance in the field of medicine. However, there were also other important factors that influenced my decision in becoming a doctor.</p>
<p>is this for the college’s general personal statement? If so, I definitely would start over. Stay away from medicine in the personal statement. Speak about an experience or a topic that has changed you or affected you (not medicine).</p>
<p>no…im not going to use it for college…but thanx for the advice…but wht if therez nothing that changed ur life…do u just make one up?</p>
<p>no</p>
<p>it’s blatantly obvious whether you think so or not…write that nothing changed your life…</p>
<p>for my personal experience could i write about how fainting during a church service and being unconsious for a few seconds motivated me to lose weight? (i know its kinda out there)</p>
<p>i def. would not use it…im referring to neha. and if you’re gonna make something up, atleast make it more interesting lol…unless that really did change your life, then you should focus all your energy on spicing it up a bit.</p>
<p>neha89, the personal statement doesn’t have to be about a life-changing experience. It could just be a reflection about a slowly building interest, or about how & why you admire someone…</p>