<p>Could someone critique my essay please?</p>
<p>Don’t bother offering if you’re an '09er. </p>
<p>And please only respond if you’re a legit reviewer and not someone with like 5 posts.
I already had one of my friends steal parts from one of my essays so my trust level is basically -9128392. ):</p>
<p>Someone who can give great, quick feedback is desperately requested. Please. (:</p>
<p>aww, and you still call that person a ‘friend’?</p>
<p>you can send it over, i’m a '10 BUT i’ve been writing alot of my future college essays and have read many others on CC already. :D</p>
<p>well, I’m an 09-er…but I like quirky…heheh and I laughed at “abuse”…</p>
<p>i’ll take a peek at it–i reviewed a bunch of my friends essays (without stealing their stuff, i promise!) and they said i really helped them.</p>
<p>If you can read my essay (commonapp), sure! I have trust issues too. Girlfriend dumped me :P</p>