<p>PM me if you wish to critique it. I’d appreciate it</p>
<p>sure i’ll take a look.</p>
<p>I love being brutal.</p>
<p>@noratoledo: Wow. 9 posts from 10:47 to 11:15 in multiple forums, all saying the same thing. I guess the graduate program isn’t working out too well if you have to be a shill for essay services (unless, of course, they are your services). If that’s the case, I suggest that you fire your marketing director.</p>