Hi! Please chance me for duke & johns hopkins regular decision!
Intended Major : Pre Med studies
Race : African American
Gender: Female
Stats
GPA: 3.6 (UW) 
4.2 (W)
15/258 rank (top 10%)
my GPA is definitely one of my weaknesses
all honors classes from 9-12 grade, excluding PE & electives
•going test optional•
APs:
not submitting any scores for any of my AP’s, my grades at the time of applying are in the parentheses
AP Calculus (1st quarter: 90, 2nd quarter: 83)
AP English Languge & Composition (88)
AP Biology (90)
AP Literature (1st quarter: 97, 2nd quarter: 95)
AP Comp Science (100)
(i put 1st and 2nd quarter for ap calc & lit bc i’m currently taking them & duke required mid year report. the rest are final grades & have been taken in previous years)
EC’s:
•local stem summer internship (only 20 students in my whole state were selected) took place in 11th grade
•local stem research & mentorship program (again only 20 students in my state were selected) took place in 10th grade
•the name of this EC will reveal where i live so i’ll vaguely describe it; once again another 20 students in my state were selected & we participated in a 4 week extensive medical program with rigorous college level courses, many guest speakers attended and spoke about their career in medicine & were to present a project at the end to be judged (my group ended up receiving 2nd place, this took place summer before 12th grade)
•youth group (9-11 grade)
•co captain of dance club (afrobeats genre mainly) this took place in 10th grade
•national honor society member (10th grade- present)
•cheerleader (12th grade)
•another local program where the top 15 students in my grade at the time were selected and we were to attend weekly meetings at a local university where we discussed our future basically (college process, finances, that sort of thing) took place in 11th grade
•local hospital volunteer (52 hours, 10th grade)
•volunteer at this local medical firm thing (32 or 36 hours, i can’t remember) this took place in 10th grade also
(In my additional information section I included how i started a business the summer before my senior year in order to fund college, i have so far received over 100 orders, over $1k in profits, and over 5k on our instagram account)
•i submitted a resume for johns hopkins that also included: key club, drama club, student council, matheletes, & yearbook club
Awards(not many, my school doesn’t give the chance for students to earn many awards):
-2nd place for 4 week medical program
-High Honor Roll 9-12
-Scholarship recipient (local once again but to get this students had to score at the highest level on a test that all students in my state were required to take between 9th and 11th grade)
LOR:
As for my guidance counselor i’m not sure how good my recommendation will be but it seems like it’ll be pretty strong. The two teachers i asked are quite fond of me so I know those ones are good recommendations
Essays:
Common app essay: 8/10, pretty unique, talked about my hair (specifically the journey i’ve had with coming to love my natural hair texture & what that journey has taught me/how that journey has shaped me as a person )
Hopkins Supplement: 6/10, was pretty okay. talked about programs & clubs specific to the college & connected it to how it would benefit me & what i want to do as a career
Duke Supplement: 7/10, was one of my favorite “why this college” essays but it wasn’t anything spectacular, also made sure to include programs local to duke to show i’ve done my research.