Please chance me for these universities

Applying to College
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<p>Colleges:</p>

<p>Upenn Wharton (ED)
NYU Stern
Carnegie Mellon Tepper
Fordham
Michigan Ann Arbor Ross
Boston University
Northeastern
Emory University Goizueta
MIT Sloan</p>

<p>SAT scores are projections, i just sat for my SAT1 and will sit for SAT2 mid year.
Originally from Malaysia but finishing HS in Melbourne, Australia. Will be applying for Fall 2012 admission. If i could improve on anything please add it in your reply.
Thank you guys so much. </p>

<ul>
<li>SAT I: 2100+ </li>
<li>SAT II: 800 Chinese, 700+ World History</li>
<li>TOEFL: 112/120 </li>
<li>GPA: 3.8 </li>
<li>Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): Top 10%</li>
<li>Junior and Senior Course Load: Business Management, History, International Studies, English, Chinese, Calc Maths, Accounting, Hospitality. </li>
<li>Languages: English, Chinese, Malay and Cantonese </li>
</ul>

<p>Subjective:</p>

<ul>
<li>Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis):
Team Leader - [Team</a> eXile5 - E-sports Professionals Proudly Supported by Western Digital](<a href=“http://www.team-exile5.org%5DTeam”>http://www.team-exile5.org)
Former professional gamer sponsored by IT brands such as AMD.ATi and Alienware, travelled internationally to represent Malaysia in gaming tournaments. Brand ambassador and featured in various mags/newspapers. </li>
</ul>

<p>Member - Democratic Action Party Malaysia
*we are fighting for a free and democratic socialist Malaysia that offers equal opportunity regardless of race and ethnicity and to get rid of corruption</p>

<p>Student Reference Committee (President)
International Student Council (President)
Member - School Soccer Team (2008-2010) - Avg 5 hours a week
Member - School Softball Team (2008-2009) - Avg 5 hours a week
DJ - Syn FM Community Radio (2008) - 30 hours
Work experience as Waiter/Barista/Cook (2009-2010) - Avg 7 hours a week.</p>

<ul>
<li>Job/Work Experience: Over 100 hours as a cook/barista/waiter at hospitality training restaurant. </li>
<li>Summer Activities: Golf, Travelling, Camps </li>
<li>Essays: Will be pretty decent (Got 11 months to work on it) </li>
<li>Teacher Recommendation: Excellent </li>
<li>Counselor Rec: Excellent </li>
</ul>

<p>Other</p>

<ul>
<li>School Type: Private</li>
<li>Ethnicity: Asian</li>
<li>Gender: Male </li>
<li>Hooks: First gen college</li>
</ul>

<p>Really passionate about getting in finance. Since i was young Dad has always talked to me about business and investing. My cousin is my biggest role model, he’s only 27 and doing really well for himself working in a multinational. Apart from business im really into current affairs, world conflict and politics. Currently in a political party in Malaysia called the DAP opposing the corrupt government in my country. </p>

<p>Any tips on what else i can improve on is greatly appreciated. Thanks again!</p>

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<p>You definitely got accepted at all of these schools. Congrats!</p>

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<p>you mean ill definitely get accept at all of those schools i listed? somehow i doubt that!! are you serious! :(</p>

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<p>Wharton and MIT are very high reaches.
Michigan is probably a match.
Rest are average to low chance.</p>

<p>Only thing about your profile that stands out is the professional gaming, and I’m not sure how colleges even view that. It’s not academic in any way, and you won’t be able to use it to contribute to schools. I’m not sure, but it could even detract from your profile?</p>

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<p>why would michigan be a match and not the others besides wharton and mit? </p>

<p>although gaming isnt academic in any way it involves heaps of teamwork especially if your wanting to play at a very competitive level, its like any other sport. i was competing for money and representing corporate sponsors and promoting their products at big events.</p>