<p>I am applying for global MBA in a college and i wrote an essay on the topic “Has the world shrunk into a global village” (word limit 600) and “Purpose of global MBA”(limit 150 words)… please provide necessary feedback on both essays…</p>
<p>Essay 1-"Yes, the world has shrunk into a global village. Not only the technology of the present age but also the inter-dependant economy and the globalisation have brought us together.
A continuous internetwork of technology has weaved the living men together. With its help one can reach another person at any point of time, as per one’s will. The world has been unified through various media such as television, news, internet, social networks etc. Such technology has made it possible for people living in one part of the world to know what is hapenning in the other. An example of this could be cited from the fact that monetary aid was provided to tsunami victims of india (in 2004), by means of donations from the common men from different countries.
According to current estimates, more than 80% of the world’s proven oil reserves are located in OPEC Member Countries, with the bulk of OPEC oil reserves in the Middle East, amounting to 66% of the OPEC total. If even a single nation amongst the OPEC countries says that it won’t export oil anymore, the oil prices throughout the world will rise, effecting the price of other commodities throughout the world.
Globalisation has brought many brands into the markets of various countries which actually originated in other countries, example - Sony. Recent slowdowns in various parts of the world have shown that when the economy of one part of the world is effected economies of other parts will get effected too. For example India’s Growth got effected because of the slump in the US economy, because US is the customer/buyer of various commodities from india; if the US is in an economical crises, India will lose a strong customer of its exports such as engineering services, and that would effect indian industries.<br>
Interdependence amongst various parts of the world has thus made today’s world a global village where one part is not only aware of what is happenings in the other but also gets effected by the happenings in the other. "</p>
<p>Essay 2-"To be a part of this program would mean to have an opportunity to gather much needed International Exposure. This program would allow me to interact with students and teachers from various backgrounds, not to mention from three of the leading colleges of the world. Such diversified interaction will help me imbibe good decision making skills, which along with the work experience that I would gain from working in three leading companies of each country, would help me in my aim of becoming a Business leader in the future. This program would also give me an opportunity to understand the work ethic and work culture in two developed nations (USA and China) and one developing economy, India, this will provide me with a good idea of different policies and processes adopted to run businesses in different economies (developed or developing). All this would help me with my ultimate target of starting and hence leading a technical venture (aiming at Electronic products) in India at a later point in my career, this would be backed by my current technical oriented experience within the same domain. "</p>
<p>Please help as this might be my only chance of applying</p>