Please check my UC personal statement :)

<p>It’s for Prompt #2, please let me know if you are willing to critique and shred to pieces my personal statement! Be as bluntly honest as you can, Cali is my dream so anything that will help will only aid me :)</p>

<p>I’m struggling with the personal statement, but am overall a good writer; send it over and I could take a look</p>

<p>Sent thanks :slight_smile: Anyone else please?</p>

<p>I’ll be happy to help!</p>

<p>Sure! Send it over :)</p>

<p>ill help you out !</p>

<p>why not . i have a few hours to kill tomorrow :)</p>

<p>Send it over, i’ll take a look :)</p>